Velamma - Story ideas

[Rajveer]

Dear rajveer,

Maxter will review your story and get back to you.

Ok Surya..

but Im still waiting 4 days for Maxter. Wer is He?

bydway Surya U r also d part of Velamma.com. Hows my New Story Velamma ''At Home''.?

Ur Openion??? U like??

( I dont know my Stories will work or not.)

[surya]

Ok Surya..

but Im still waiting 4 days for Maxter. Wer is He?

bydway Surya U r also d part of Velamma.com. Hows my New Story Velamma ''At Home''.?

Ur Openion??? U like??

( I dont know my Stories will work or not.)

Hi Rajveer,

I am the Admin of Velamma.com and maxter is a volunteer editor who reviews new stories. I just read your story its NICE and ill forward your story to our editors team.

And mean while lets wait for maxter opinion as well.

[Rajveer]

Hi Rajveer,

I am the Admin of Velamma.com and maxter is a volunteer editor who reviews new stories. I just read your story its NICE and ill forward your story to our editors team.

And mean while lets wait for maxter opinion as well.

Woow Thank U so Much for Ur Opinion Surya.

Ok I Undrstand. Waiting for Maxter. 1) Velamma ''In Train''. 2) Velamma ''At Home''.

[legendoneday]

OIL MASSAGE of Velamma MAMAI




one day vellamma's nephew cam to stay for few days....
earlier he had no bad intension for velamma, but one day velamma asked him for help in kitchen cleaning
. velamma was wearing nighty upto jus below her knees and stand on the high table and ask his nephew to
hold the table so that she should not fell down. whil doing that unintenstionaly he sees velamma;s panty and creamy, fleshy
thighs whihc are visible from her night ( as she is standing on the table). first he ignores and says what i am doing she is my mami
but then he could not controlled and take the full view.


suddnly he stats holding vellamma form he legs and then thighs. vellamma didnt notice as she got busy in work.


the guy tries to touch her butts and lost controll nd velamma fells down and got **** her back.




in the day while making sweeping the floor she ties her nighty till her kness and the guy enjoys her ehite thighs and pany and boobs view
while watching Tv.


he goes out of controlls and go to wash room and master bate while fantacising that he is fuking velamma.
and plans how he can get advantage of her awesome body.


in the evaning guy, velamma an her husband enjoys Olyampics games on tv after dinner.


he sits next to velamma on sofa and while chearing up the player in joy he puts his hand on velamma's thigh and rubs 4-5 times.


suddnly vellamma find that awkward and says you people enjoy, i am gng to sleep.


while going she ask her husband that i got **** my back in the day time will he aply oil and give her
massage on her back. he says ok you go i come in few minute.
velaame goes to deep sleep. her husband request his nephew that i am geting interest in that match, will he please go and
give vellamma a massage on her back.


he thinks wao god has fullfilled my desire , what a chance to touch her body,
he says yes you please carry on i will do the massage.


when he enters the room sees vellamma is in deep sleep and and her back is towards the door and in her sleep her night has gone up to her thighs
he got excitation.
he goes and first slowly kisses her legs till her thighs and suddenly vellama makes sleepy noise and says "app agaye please jaldi oil meri back main laga dijiye mujhe bahut gehri need aa rahi hai"
and he then comes to his senses.


he thinks ooh that she is considering him her husband he slowly takes oil in his hands and applies on her legs ...
she says not there darling aplly on my back.


he then drag her nighty to her back and only left in her lower body is panty ....


he got surprise by her plumpy and smooth hot butts and thighs and thinks that to his lucky day and he will take ful
advantage.


slowly he applies oil to her back the slowly slowy reaches her waiste and the slowly slowly removes lower down her panty to thighs and removes it complelty.


the suddnly he herd noise at door and he quikly cover aunty with her nighty and laid down himself next to her as if he is slepping.


velamma's husband sees that he is slepping next to her..thinks y to disturb him now let me sleep in the tv room only.


he lefts then the boy wakes up and quicky turn off the light and turn the dim tablelamp light.


and again starts the process and the slowly slowly takes her night up to her showlder and sees
her massive bra and says to vellama to open it else it will get oil patches.


velamma in deep sleep could not recognise his voice and ask him to remove himself ..


then he does the same and starts sucking her massive boobs...


while vellamma enjoy that in sleep..


then he goes nude and starts kissing all over her body and the in side postion he enter his dick in her pussy.


the moment he enters the velamma wakes up and says what are you doing...please leave me..


first he says please let m complete...


she says no any time your mama will come and caught you and its illegal..i am your mami you cant do it to me...


then he palys a game and says ..actualy i got **** **** one day while playing cricket and
doctor said that your penis wont erect now... you have to practice and give massage to it to
make it erect hard...so i am just trying to check it that will it ejaculate..please let me do else i will lost my man power..


she thinks and says please take it our i will shake it with my hand he still fucks her hard ..then she pushes him aways and says.let me help you
with my hand..he says ok...


then she tries for houlf and hour...but he does not ejaculate then she says please cum fast he says i cant help may be earlier it was going fine
i may have ejaculated till now..


then she thinks that i may get caught any time..so best way is to let him cum fast by any way..
and more over i am not doing any thing wrong infact i am helpig him as per doactor said.


so she says ,...ok you can do the way you were dong but you can not insert my pussy..try in my ass..


then he says ok..he then again in side pose insert in her ass..while doing that he hold her boobs ..she says please remove your hands
from her...he says i am just trying to have grip of you body to insert properly..then she agrees..


while enjoys alot and thinks that what a chance i got to fool my mami and enjoying her ass..


while then he fucks her hand while velamma feels painfull and controls her paining ass...
and she says dont come inside her ass..but in hurry and fast move ment he comes inside her ass...
kiss her lips and says thank you for helping me..to complete my first phase of treatment..


then she thinks surprisngly "first Phase"....


first part of oil massage ends here.

[maxter]

@Rajveer that is a great storyline "AT HOME" and with the amount of naughtiness that is starting to fill up Velamma's life. she can also have a threesome to train this girl. what say about that? Would you like to see her in a FFM Threesome?

I haven't read the other one you have quoted as "IN TRAIN". I don't think that concepts that have been used in SAVITA BHABHI might be such a treat here. People have already read what happened with SAVITA in train and if an episode features that script, then for sure there will be comparisons and I don't want that to happen. What I would like to see is something really sleazy, sexy, mature and yet un-covered by any of the comics so far. I hope you would understand what I am trying to say.

BTW, Sorry for the late reply, was busy with some work. Great to see some Velamma lovers coming up with really mind-blowing ideas.

@Lavaboyz your concept of getting RANI as an ex-lover of Ramesh and also a rival of Velamma might just hold the key as well. They can then get it on with each other in order to show their love and care for Ramesh.

Dear @Legendoneday, I haven't read your story at the moment, but will get back to you when I have read it completely. Sorry!

[legendoneday]

ok thanks...but do consider it...this idea will rock.

[surya]

OIL MASSAGE of Velamma MAMAI
first part of oil massage ends here.

Nice story legendoneday, probably your story might be featured in Velamma comics and you will be a lucky member to win a FREE one month subscription velamma.com

[legendoneday]

thnx alot.....sir...

[maxter]

@legendoneday Read the story that you have quoted here. What it seems like is the same plot that was used in Velamma part 1 and 2, the same won't happen with Velamma again keeping the fact in mind that she had already experienced the same thing with Prakash. So I don't think that the same thing, i.e., Penis getting **** and it wont get erect again will do the trick. You'll need to think of something new. The mami and kid thing will do, but not the storyline.

We need some change, can't use the same storyline again and again.

MaXTER

[surya]

@legendoneday Read the story that you have quoted here. What it seems like is the same plot that was used in Velamma part 1 and 2, the same won't happen with Velamma again keeping the fact in mind that she had already experienced the same thing with Prakash. So I don't think that the same thing, i.e., Penis getting **** and it wont get erect again will do the trick. You'll need to think of something new. The mami and kid thing will do, but not the storyline.

We need some change, can't use the same storyline again and again.

MaXTER

Dear maxter,

But i think we can use the concept of massage, whats your opinion?