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    Quote Originally Posted by Nickel View Post
    the fifth point of ur story is CONTROVERSIAL....

    Anyway,I just gave u my opinion,at the end of the day it's phantom-deshmukh-retro who have the final say,I'm just a fan
    don't go for quote.Go to the original post.... I can't change the quotes.And BTW as a story teller every comment and advice for me is very importent.Thats the way one can improve him self.And thaks very much.
    Last edited by nestoffire; 07-13-2012 at 01:20 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nickel View Post
    "HORNY" would be an apt word,since karisma and ayesha are just sharing their "fetish".

    "slutty" is an OFFENSIVE word,use it with caution.

    Anyway,Wahidbhai,What about Bangladeshi women,how r they?
    well sorry for dat ... ps. most women of BD are hot not like Savita Bhabhi though but still
    Last edited by Wahid145; 07-14-2012 at 10:10 AM.
    Savita Bhabhi only if i could get u . DotA FTW

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    I have posted a story idea (in hints) a couple of days ago which i thought will be good idea but now i think it might be "CONTROVERSIAL" to some extent and hence edited the idia a bit but now i think it would be better if i leave this idea for now atlest. And leave everything to the respected story writters of kirtu (MR. Rahul).Well that doesn't mean the story is finished its just changed its course.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wahid145 View Post
    hahaha i didnt knew indian ladies are so slutty
    well dont underestimate anybody

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wahid145 View Post
    well sorry for dat ... ps. most women of BD are hot not like Savita Bhabhi though but still
    ok no problem.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nickel View Post
    "HORNY" would be an apt word,since karisma and ayesha are just sharing their "fetish".

    "slutty" is an OFFENSIVE word,use it with caution.

    Anyway,Wahidbhai,What about Bangladeshi women,how r they?
    Thanks a lot.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sexykarisma View Post
    Thanks a lot.



    you cum cum memsaab,you cum cum ;-)

    remember that dialogue? :-)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nickel View Post
    you cum cum memsaab,you cum cum ;-)

    remember that dialogue? :-)
    yes i know.

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    It was the beginning of winter. The weather was very nice not too hot neither too cold. A perfect environment for hanging out, especially for picnic. And most of the neighbors of Ashok were going for picnic to enjoy the weather and as well as getting some fun. Ashok was also planning for a picnic for sometimes which he wants to give savita as a present. Because due to his workload he didn’t get enough time for savita and through this idea he thought he can spend some quality time with savita. But whenever he tried to plane, he get something was missing but don’t know what. The next day during lunch period he consult this with his colig “rohit” and ask him for help. He told him if you really want to make this picnic memorable then the best way will be “to arrange a office picnic” where all of our coligs will be invited along with their family and in this way you will also be able to make her come known to our coligs. Ashok didn’t like this idea at first but when “ch1” tried to ……….. him and told him that, in this way she will be happy too and most importantly she wouldn’t be alone in the picnic. Ashok agreed. And after lunch he told all of his coligs about this picnic idea. All of them gets very excited about this idea but as it was ashok’s idea he was made the main coordinator of the picnic. On his way back to home ashok was very opset as well as nervous about savita’s reaction when she came to know about this mess. That night after having diner he gathered all of his will power and told her about the picnic plane and also explained about what happened. But surprisingly she wasn’t angry at all, infect she was very happy. All though this seems a bit strange to him but he thought, “Whatever yeer, at least she is happy, what more I can expect.”But In reality savita was planning something else. And from the next day he begin to collect resources and marketing. A week passed and the very day of picnic came at last. As decided before they all meet to a place from where the picnic bus is going to start and everybody hop on it except ashok as he have to stay with the food and all that with some of his male office friends. Meanwhile in the bus savita set on the windowsit and “rohot” set just beside him.”Akshoy” set just behind savita.

    [Akshay was a new comer/ fresure in ashok’s office and he also been Ashok’s home couple of times with him. As a result he become very close to savita too.]


    “rohit” and savita was start gossiping and continue it through out the jurney but during this conversation she once asked “ch1” if he been that place before and if so does he know about any place where no one go usually. And continue the conversation. After an hour they reached their destination and have their breakfast after half an hour. Then everybody went to visit the site in small groups. savita and “rohit” went towards the north side while gossiping. On the other hand “Akshay” who was a new comer was getting very qurious about the closeness of savita and “ch1” since the beginning and hence he decided to follow them. Following their tracks he reached to a river side and quickly hide into bushes. Because the sight he was going to encounter was something he could never imagine. Savita and “ch1” were getting naked and start having sex with each other. At first he was so ……..that he couldn’t figure out what to do but somehow he manage to get control over himself and start recording the hole thing by his iphone. But as it was a sunny day the flash of his silver cotted phone get in notice of savita. When she saw him and tell “ch1” about this he gets very angry and a bit afred too. He replied, “who the hell is that, I will **** him.”But savita stop him and start walking towards “Akshay”. Here she was closing towards “ch2” and there several types of thoughts were rising in his mind like what will happen now, is she going to scroll him or get angry with him. Or the worst think he will get him fired from his job by her husband. He was so afraid that he just close his eye as nothing was coming in his mind. He also thought about running but the sight was so beautiful that he couldn’t been abole to move a single muscule from there.

    [Description of the sight: Savita was getting closer and closer, her hairs were floating on the breeze like they were playing with them. Her boobs were jumping/ woobling like children jumping on the trampoline. In the shine of the sun her body was gloing like a golden cup, a virgin can just imagine. It seems the sun also want’s to touch every single corner of her body with his very shine. She was wearing a platinum neck less, bindi, white high hills and also pare of ear rings as shown in the 1st page of kinara lane.]


    She came to him (ch2) and kiss his leaps (for almost 30 to 40 seconds) without saying anything. And then said, ”Why are you spoiling mode and weasting your time when you can also be part of it.” And take him to the riverside and start the lovemaking with both guys. It was almost afternoon when she got a call of ashok.
    [ meanwhile both of the guys are at their pick and drilling her holes like dogs.]
    She pick up the phone because if she not, ashok could get suspicious about that. Ashok asked where she was ? In reply she told, “I am with Rohit and Akshay and we are seeing some sites nearby.” Ashok told her that the mile is ready and savita replied we will be backkkkkkkkkk…..” As Akshay put his dick inside her mouth at that moment, no even wait to cut the call. Within a minute they come and all of them came back to the spot ,have their mile and get back to their home.
    [ch1= Rohit, Ch2= Akshay, sometimes in this story I mentioned the characters as ch1 and ch2.]

    [Add this if you like:-

    She get both i mean she get a double panetretion during the picnic and after picnic ashok get busy with maneging all the arrengement while she went to home with akshay and fucked again till ashok arrived.]
    Last edited by nestoffire; 07-17-2012 at 11:41 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by nestoffire View Post
    It was the beginning of winter. The weather was very nice not too hot neither too cold. A perfect environment for hanging out, especially for picnic. And most of the neighbors of Ashok were going for picnic to enjoy the weather and as well as getting some fun. Ashok was also planning for a picnic for sometimes which he wants to give savita as a present. Because due to his workload he didn’t get enough time for savita and through this idea he thought he can spend some quality time with savita. But whenever he tried to plane, he get something was missing but don’t know what. The next day during lunch period he consult this with his colig “rohit” and ask him for help. He told him if you really want to make this picnic memorable then the best way will be “to arrange a office picnic” where all of our coligs will be invited along with their family and in this way you will also be able to make her come known to our coligs. Ashok didn’t like this idea at first but when “ch1” tried to ……….. him and told him that, in this way she will be happy too and most importantly she wouldn’t be alone in the picnic. Ashok agreed. And after lunch he told all of his coligs about this picnic idea. All of them gets very excited about this idea but as it was ashok’s idea he was made the main coordinator of the picnic. On his way back to home ashok was very opset as well as nervous about savita’s reaction when she came to know about this mess. That night after having diner he gathered all of his will power and told her about the picnic plane and also explained about what happened. But surprisingly she wasn’t angry at all, infect she was very happy. All though this seems a bit strange to him but he thought, “Whatever yeer, at least she is happy, what more I can expect.”But In reality savita was planning something else. And from the next day he begin to collect resources and marketing. A week passed and the very day of picnic came at last. As decided before they all meet to a place from where the picnic bus is going to start and everybody hop on it except ashok as he have to stay with the food and all that with some of his male office friends. Meanwhile in the bus savita set on the windowsit and “rohot” set just beside him.”Akshoy” set just behind savita.

    [Akshay was a new comer/ fresure in ashok’s office and he also been Ashok’s home couple of times with him. As a result he become very close to savita too.]

    “rohit” and savita was start gossiping and continue it through out the jurney but during this conversation she once asked “ch1” if he been that place before and if so does he know about any place where no one go usually. And continue the conversation. After an hour they reached their destination and have their breakfast after half an hour. Then everybody went to visit the site in small groups. savita and “rohit” went towards the north side while gossiping. On the other hand “Akshay” who was a new comer was getting very qurious about the closeness of savita and “ch1” since the beginning and hence he decided to follow them. Following their tracks he reached to a river side and quickly hide into bushes. Because the sight he was going to encounter was something he could never imagine. Savita and “ch1” were getting naked and start having sex with each other. At first he was so ……..that he couldn’t figure out what to do but somehow he manage to get control over himself and start recording the hole thing by his iphone. But as it was a sunny day the flash of his silver cotted phone get in notice of savita. When she saw him and tell “ch1” about this he gets very angry and a bit afred too. He replied, “who the hell is that, I will **** him.”But savita stop him and start walking towards “Akshay”. Here she was closing towards “ch2” and there several types of thoughts were rising in his mind like what will happen now, is she going to scroll him or get angry with him. Or the worst think he will get him fired from his job by her husband. He was so afraid that he just close his eye as nothing was coming in his mind. He also thought about running but the sight was so beautiful that he couldn’t been abole to move a single muscule from there.

    [Description of the sight: Savita was getting closer and closer, her hairs were floating on the breeze like they were playing with them. Her boobs were jumping/ woobling like children jumping on the trampoline. In the shine of the sun her body was gloing like a golden cup, a virgin can just imagine. It seems the sun also want’s to touch every single corner of her body with his very shine. She was wearing a platinum neck less, bindi, white high hills and also pare of ear rings as shown in the 1st page of kinara lane.]

    She came to him (ch2) and kiss his leaps (for almost 30 to 40 seconds) without saying anything. And then said, ”Why are you spoiling mode and weasting your time when you can also be part of it.” And take him to the riverside and start the lovemaking with both guys. It was almost afternoon when she got a call of ashok.
    [ meanwhile both of the guys are at their pick and drilling her holes like dogs.]
    She pick up the phone because if she not, ashok could get suspicious about that. Ashok asked where she was ? In reply she told, “I am with Rohit and Akshay and we are seeing some sites nearby.” Ashok told her that the mile is ready and savita replied we will be backkkkkkkkkk…..” As Akshay put his dick inside her mouth at that moment, no even wait to cut the call. Within a minute they come and all of them came back to the spot ,have their mile and get back to their home.
    [ch1= Rohit, Ch2= Akshay, sometimes in this story I mentioned the characters as ch1 and ch2.]
    Nice story. but needs some detailing like how Rohit and Savita start sex. I mean what lead them into sex. BTW nice description of Savita

 

 

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